Tuesday, November 6, 2007

funny story

Once apon a time there was a one guy called Kevin.Kevin had really expensive soccer have a little baby.shoose. That soccer shoose had really big cleat. Kevin have little babby. That baby was trying to play with expencive soccer shoose cleats. So the Kevin said "Hallo, babee, hall". And that baby was thinking, that cleat was Neither - nor. And baby went to his sleeping bad. One day Kevin want it to go the Ellis island. But there was two things that Kevin worried. In ellis island, there are lots of dieases and there was a one girl that is tall women-green called Elizabeth . She is in 8th grade, but she was taller than me. And Kevin have to give her a prescent, because kevin thought I have to show that I am nice guy. When Kevin got in to the ellis island, I saw lots of qurantine. Because there were lots of terro. And ellis island empire was worried about terro. But the cool things in ellise island was, there were lots of pretty meadows. It was so beautiful. This meadows were already pass then decades. In ellis island, there were lots of native american. And I had great day. Next day Kevin went different place with his friends call Alex . So they all go to the swimming pool.Suddenly Kevin saw Jin , and Devin . In that time Alex was trying to jump in to the pool. But suddenly Alex got attack in his veins. And Kevin purpose the tube and throw to the Alex. 1minutes later, police came in to the beach and police man was trying to figure out what happened. Police man was checking process of heart. And Kevin just said What the hack.Police man used all of his skill that make peron alive. Sunddenly, Alex got alive and started to run. When Alex woke up, Alex was making strategies of sheep. Alex organized all the information and start to make. He preview what he did and make another better sheep. Alex wrote big text in front of sheep. And he summarized how did he make it in the book. There were lots of details with sticky notes. When Alex and went his house, he wrote a journal.When he finished his journal he connected the laptop and started to play game. When he was playing the game he pause and reflect. He reread his journal. Alex went out side and go get some coffe. He went coffe shop with remembering vocab words.
When he was walking, somebody gave him a brainstorm question. It was about prewriting. the question answer have to be short and Alex narrow the answer. He was not shore and he use Internet. When the person who gave the question was collecting the answer, When Alex was running his hurt got stop and Alex got died.

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