ESL Score

My name is Jin Ahn. Yesterday in math class,Mr.Major gave me a ESL report card. I was getting crazy and crazy about ESL score. After school in the bus, I open my ESL report card. In that time my mind was getting small and small, because the score was bad. I was staying in the shelter. I thought I will go up, but it wasn't. In my left there was a Kevin. Kevin went to the main. When I went to Jason, Jason said he will go to the main. My best friend were gone. I thought I was alone. But the one thing that I feel okay was, main class people take a test again. I think I wish my friends will go down to shelter again and study with me.

When I was taking ESL test I felt so nerveous. The oral test was easy, but vocabulary was to hard to me. I prey alot to god. When I was taking first test, my mind was fliping over, because it was so hard. Now I make a plan to go main. It is reading many book. Every mom said, when we read, our writing will get better and we can understand more clearly. When Every test was finished I just think did I do well or not. When I was rethinking, my mind was terrouble.

Determination for know is reading alot of book and use lots hard vocabulary. We should talk alot with English. And my oral communication teacher said I should see lots of movie thay I english. I think this was good opportunity to change how to study more better.

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My mother said it's pkay about staying int shelter class, because I just went america at kindergaten for one year. I got lots relax from my mom. Kevin and Jason make me relax too. Kevin said it doesn't metter. And he said we are the best friend. I think I appreciate to my frends. When I was thinking over and over, I was so curious abou why Lilly didn't go to main class. She is such a smart girl, but I don't know why. Know I have two rival. It is lilly and Sean. They speak english very well. I think ESL test is worth test in ever I lived.

When I came in to this school I had same test, but the level was low. Know I got improve. I think I got improvement from Mr.Fambro. Sometimes I don like Mr.Fambro, but he always teach very well. He give us lots of improvrment.

I am so glad about my friends. I think Takeshi is the best improved guy. In first time of school, Takeshi was very bad at English, but know he is in main class. And Kevin is worked hard and he went main class.

This picture is my guiter picture. I am so happy!

Enormous crocodile

Name:Jin
Author: Roald Dahl
Setting: Forest
Characters: Crocodile, Chidren, Trunky, elephant....

This story is about crocodile. One day crocodile was so hungry that even he want it to eat a person. Crcodile went to the park and he was finding chidren's for lunch. Crocodile use all his brain, but it didn't work. He pretend to be a biggreen tree. Also crocodile pretend to be toy, but the turcky saved every people, that toy is a real animal.And he pretend to be banch. But it was mission failled. After Humpy(elephant) watch what crocodile was doing, hunmpy thought it was a bad crocodile. Humpy grabbed the crocodile and throw over to the space. And Humpy and children's are living peaefully.

My feeling
I think Crocodile need to think more.In that time crocodile was crazy. When I was crocodile, I will just hide and catch the childrens. In this story there were lots of lesson to me. First one is don't be selfish. Second one is think more when we are doing something. Third one is choosong good decision. I think this is a most important lesson in this book.



Mail
To.crocodile.

Hi crocodile. I think your thought was to crazy. I wish you will be in the hell. Becasue you did a bad job. When Your life was good, You must be in the haeven. I will pray for you, but in that time, I think that was a bad choice. I wish you will never eat the person. Pople have life to... Then Bye crocodile.

From: Jin
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Hockey tournoment

Today I am living school at 1:30. Because I have a hockey tournoment. In last time our team loose. We were sad. Some guys were crying, but not me. We didn't eat water during playing hockey game. It was so nerveous. When hockey game was over, our team went restuarant and talk about why we loose. The reason was every body were seek.

Today I will going to play hockey. This time our team have to win. Becasue when we loose we will get punishment to our coach. We should be nerveous,or else I will die to teacher.

The Enormous Crocodile.

Name:Jin
Author: Roald Dahl
Setting: Forest
Characters: Crocodile, Chidren, Trunky,......

This story is about crocodile. One day crocodile was so hungry that even he want it to eat a person. Crcodile went to the park and he was finding chidren's for lunch. Crocodile use all his brain, but it didn't work. Also crocodile pretend to be toy, but the bird saved every people that toy crocodile is a real animal.And he pretend to be banch and tree. But it was mission failled. After Humpy(elephant) watch what crocodile was doing, and humpy grabbed the crocodile and throw over to the space. And Humpy and children's are living peaefully.

My feeling
I think Crocodile need to think more.In that time crocodile was crazy. When I was crocodile, I will just hide and catch the childrens. In this story there were lots of lesson to me. First one is don't be selfish. Second one is think more when we are doing something. Third one is choosong good decision. I think this is a most important lesson in this book.

Mail
To.crocodile.

Hi crocodile. I think your thought was to crazy. I wish you will be in the hell. Becasue you did a bad job. When Your life was good, You must be in the haeven. I will pray for you, but in that time, I think that was a bad choice. I wish you will never eat the person. Pople have life to... Then Bye crocodile.

From: Jin

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Now I am in Jeju Island. I play golf with my dad and my mom. It was real golf. It take 4hours to finish. There were lots bunker. It was huge golf place. And I had great day.

Have a bad day`

Today I had a great day. Because teacher was kind. In after school I played alot in the bus with Alice and Kevin. We talked about Jason. Jason will know this happen, but Jason said it is a secret. When I came back in to the house, I slept little bit. I think I had great day.

Activity in the school

I had Activity in Mrs.Major class. I had fun, because Jeffery was playing with me.
We ate snack and eat alot. Sun chip and milkiss was the best delicious in our class room. Every body took my sunchip and I took some stuff from Devin too. I think I had really great day.

Why are Fire Drills important for our school.

First fire drill is traning how to alive when we gets fire in the house or school. It's important to our school, because we are yeoung and we must be alive. Our school rule is, when we gets fire, we must go to soccer field and seat down quikly with no talking. We must be quiet. And sometimes when the door close, we just wait untill door comes down and push the door.

we have to learn fire drills, because we don't know when the fire will come. We should know how can we move nicely in the fire. That is why we have to do fire drills. First we have to relax. When there is know teacher we must stay and wait for fire people. I think fire drills are very important to us.

Second thing is, the yeoungest people have to go first. Because yeoung people can not make good desition. Some times When yeougest people can't make desition, we ,must teach in the school. Older people have lots experience. I guess older guy will be strong and they have to care yeounger people. They might doesn't know about using fire extinguisher.We should make yeounger go first.

Third things about fire is, rules and how to use the tools. We have to know how to use the fire tools. We have to know how to use tools and we should know how to open the door. That is the importance in the fire drills.we should train alot and we should decide quickly.

When I was writing about fir drills, I felt it is so important to our school. I think I have to listen carefully when teacher is saying about fire. I think it is little hard to train, but this is good for us. I think fire drills are making death or alive.

Today I woke up at 8 am

Today I woke up so late. I think I slept well. I dream very well and I was not tired. I had hockey tournoment. I scored and our team won. I think I had great day. After hockey game I ate pizza with my friends. When I finished the eating, I play hockey again. I think I had really great day.

tired day

Today I went to play hockey. I played 4hours and I was so tired. I was almost getting dead. I had great about making solar oven with my mon after I went to play hockey. I think I did well in making solar oven. I think I had great day today.

Why are Fire Drills important for our school.

First fire drill is traning how to alive when we gets fire in the house or school. It's important to our school, because we are yeoung and we must be alive. Our school rule is, when we gets fire, we must go to soccer field and seat down quikly with no talking. We must be quiet. And sometimes when the door close, we just wait untill door comes down and push the door.

One reason that is important to our school is, we must be safe. We have to listem carefully to teachers derection. Then we will be safe and teacher will be safe. We should stay when the teacher is gone. We don't when the fire will come.We allwish we will be safe.

Second thing is, the yeoungest people have to go first. Because yeoung people can not make good disition. older people have lots experience. I guess older guy will be strong and they have to care yeounger people. They might doesn't know about using fire extinguisher.We should make yeounger go first.

Third things about fire is, rules. We have to know how to use the fire tools. We have to know how to use tools and we should know how to open the door. That is the importance in the fire drills.we should train alot and we should decide quickly.

When I was writing about fir drills, I felt it is so important to our school. I think I have to listen carefully when teacher is saying about fire. I think it is little hard to train, but this is good for us. I think fire drills are making death or alive.

Today is the vocab test.

Yesterday My uncle came in to my house from America. I was so glad that my uncle was coming. He gave me a hockey glove. My mind wsa flying over, because I had greatday. Today I woke up so early, because I didn't do my homework. I was slipy , but I can not sleep.

When it was 6:30, I went to my bus and I started to sleep. But the reason that I can not sleep well was,somebody was so loud in the back seat. When Kevin came in beside my seat, I was so happy. 5I think I had great in the bus.

When I got in to the Gsis, in the math class, the fire bell rang. I was so scared about that.when I was following mr,major direction, Mr.Lee was taking a picture. In that time I just laugh. I wish today will be the best day in ever.

funny story

Once apon a time there was a one guy called Kevin.Kevin had really expensive soccer have a little baby.shoose. That soccer shoose had really big cleat. Kevin have little babby. That baby was trying to play with expencive soccer shoose cleats. So the Kevin said "Hallo, babee, hall". And that baby was thinking, that cleat was Neither - nor. And baby went to his sleeping bad. One day Kevin want it to go the Ellis island. But there was two things that Kevin worried. In ellis island, there are lots of dieases and there was a one girl that is tall women-green called Elizabeth . She is in 8th grade, but she was taller than me. And Kevin have to give her a prescent, because kevin thought I have to show that I am nice guy. When Kevin got in to the ellis island, I saw lots of qurantine. Because there were lots of terro. And ellis island empire was worried about terro. But the cool things in ellise island was, there were lots of pretty meadows. It was so beautiful. This meadows were already pass then decades. In ellis island, there were lots of native american. And I had great day. Next day Kevin went different place with his friends call Alex . So they all go to the swimming pool.Suddenly Kevin saw Jin , and Devin . In that time Alex was trying to jump in to the pool. But suddenly Alex got attack in his veins. And Kevin purpose the tube and throw to the Alex. 1minutes later, police came in to the beach and police man was trying to figure out what happened. Police man was checking process of heart. And Kevin just said What the hack.Police man used all of his skill that make peron alive. Sunddenly, Alex got alive and started to run. When Alex woke up, Alex was making strategies of sheep. Alex organized all the information and start to make. He preview what he did and make another better sheep. Alex wrote big text in front of sheep. And he summarized how did he make it in the book. There were lots of details with sticky notes. When Alex and went his house, he wrote a journal.When he finished his journal he connected the laptop and started to play game. When he was playing the game he pause and reflect. He reread his journal. Alex went out side and go get some coffe. He went coffe shop with remembering vocab words.
When he was walking, somebody gave him a brainstorm question. It was about prewriting. the question answer have to be short and Alex narrow the answer. He was not shore and he use Internet. When the person who gave the question was collecting the answer, When Alex was running his hurt got stop and Alex got died.

Went to the school

I had great day today, because it was so fun. I played with devin and jason and kevin. I love this three friends. There are so nice to me. I think Ii had a great day.

Today I felt so bad, because Devin was mad at me. I said sorry, but he just ignored me. I know I was very sorry, but I wish Devin will say sorry to me.

describe 6 favorite sports

I am going to write about 6 favorite sports, because I love sports. My mom said it is very healthy when we play lots of sports. My favorite Sports are hockey, soccer, basketball, baseball, golf and riding bicycle. Know I will describe my favorite 6 sports.

My favorite sport is hockey. I started hockey when I was 8 years old. I didn't know how to shoot and run. Now I am brave and I can do anything. We can say hockey is the best sports in ever, because we can make strong and make better team work. Sometimes we get punishment, but I just don't care about that, because teacher is trying to teach me well. But the bad things in hockey is little bit dangerous and make people don't grow.

My second favorite sport is basketball. Because I like running sports and shooting in the basket. Basketball makes people grow allot. We jump allot and make people grow. In basketball when we score, it can be 3 points or 2 points or 1 point, because the place I shoot is different. When we shoot faraway from basket, we get 3 points. We can get 2 points when we do layup. 1point is for dunk shoot. Sometimes when we push somebody, we will get free shoot. This is why I love basketball.

Third sport that I like is soccer. I like to watch and play. We have to be strong, because we have to run very fast and kick the ball very hard. Hockey and soccer have lots of contrast. We play soccer in very big place and play in the grass. Hockey play in the ice and it is hard to balance in the ice. We have tool to shoot the ball. We have protection to. One thing that soccer is good is, we can rest allot in soccer field, but hockey is not. Hockey rink is very small and we have to move very fast and pass very fast. Soccer field have lots of space to play and easy to pass and we can run very well. I think soccer is very good sport to play.

Next is baseball. Baseball is very hard sport. We have to concentrate when we hit the ball. There are lots of rules in baseball. Homerun foul and something else. I just like to hit the ball and throw the ball. It is very fun to play.

Golf is very quiet sport. When we say something when somebody is playing, he will be mad. He can’t concentrate. I think golf is fighting with concentrate. In first time of golf, I was talking allot. But know I know how to play golf. I like golf, because it is quiet sport. But I don't like to watch in TV. It is to boring.

I like to ride bicycle. I like to ride in the hill. When I go fast, my feeling is good. I am riding bicycle for fun. My mom said bicycle is good for diet. Our leg will be strong. We can control the speed and it is so fun.

This was my 6 favorite sports essay. Thank you for reading my essay.